作者kamadevas (蔗尾蜂房)
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標題Re: [請益] 想請教一下這首詩,有兩行一直看不懂
時間Mon Nov 7 13:16:56 2011
讀到此詩一時有些感觸
試譯如下:
「倘若我得知，在不經意的狀況下」
--Edna St. Vincent Millay
倘若我得知，在不經意的狀況下，
得知你已走了，永遠地走了——
從報紙背面看來的消息，話說呀，
還要感謝讀報的地鐵鄰座乘客，
於是如此這般在這條街以及
那條路的轉角(報紙如此加油添醋)
一位行色匆匆的男子，恰好是你，
在今天正午時分恰好一命嗚呼，
我不宜放聲大哭——我其實哭不
出聲，也不想在此處扼腕悲痛——
我想我只會望著月台燈火晃眼飄忽
實則更在意我映在窗上的面容；
不然就是抬眼張望更留心搜尋
哪邊有皮衣店和該去做什麼髮型。
"If I should learn, in some quite casual way"
--Edna St. Vincent Millay
If I should learn, in some quite casual way,
That you were gone, not to return again--
Read from the back-page of a paper, say,
Held by a neighbor in a subway train,
How at the corner of this avenue
And such a street (so are the papers filled)
A hurrying man, who happened to be you,
At noon today had happened to be killed,
I should not cry aloud--I could not cry
Aloud, or wring my hands in such a place--
I should but watch the station lights rush by
With a more careful interest on my face;
Or raise my eyes and read with greater care
Where to store furs and how to treat the hair.
原詩標點則根據我手邊的書:
Edna St. Vincent Millay, Collected Sonnets of Edna St. Vincent Millay
(Revised and Expanded Edition), New York: Harper & Row, Publishers,
1988, p.5.
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