很高興發現這個版，雖然我只是個剛接觸 英文詩的新手，以下是我第一個英詩創作 ，文法有錯或是任何不妥的地方，希望前 輩們不吝指教！謝謝! I wanna be hypnotized by you Whether the fob or the eyes Can't wait to lose in your spell Dedicate my awakening Dull my dull You are a lovely mist can't fend for yourself I'm addicted to your addiction You wallow in my wallow Your fingertips with sentimentality Point at the point in the air It's the devotion I shall dangle after I wanna be hypnotized by you I wanna keep your fingertips by heart I shall extinguish myself by then -- 我們幸運極了， 不確知自己活在甚麼樣的世界。 http://www.wretch.cc/blog/jazzstanley --

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