很高兴发现这个版，虽然我只是个刚接触 英文诗的新手，以下是我第一个英诗创作 ，文法有错或是任何不妥的地方，希望前 辈们不吝指教！谢谢! I wanna be hypnotized by you Whether the fob or the eyes Can't wait to lose in your spell Dedicate my awakening Dull my dull You are a lovely mist can't fend for yourself I'm addicted to your addiction You wallow in my wallow Your fingertips with sentimentality Point at the point in the air It's the devotion I shall dangle after I wanna be hypnotized by you I wanna keep your fingertips by heart I shall extinguish myself by then -- 我们幸运极了， 不确知自己活在甚麽样的世界。 http://www.wretch.cc/blog/jazzstanley --

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