作者apriLti (跟你借的幸福)
看板poetry
標題Re: [請益] 想找比較優美的翻譯
時間Mon Jan 23 16:47:46 2006
我把全文貼上來好了@@
這是我看電影的時候看到的
後來又上網找到的原文
I carry your heart with me by e.e. cummings
I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heatt)
I am never without it (anyway I go you go, my dear;
and whatever is done by only me is your doing, my darling)
I fear no fate ( for you are my fate, my sweet)
I want no world( for beautiful you are my world. my true)
and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you
Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows
higher than the soul can hope or mind can hide)
ans this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
I carry your heart ( I carry it in my heart)
--
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1F：推 dale:其實，我正怕是 cummings──his poetry is 218.166.81.127 01/25 01:22
2F：推 dale:very visual, it is difficult (impossible?) 218.166.81.127 01/25 01:23
3F：推 dale:to translate the spatial relationship of 218.166.81.127 01/25 01:23
4F：推 dale:words. 218.166.81.127 01/25 01:24
5F：→ apriLti:@@ 還是謝謝你囉~~ 59.104.170.177 01/26 03:45