作者leeeric (研究所...)
看板poetry
標題[創作] missing you
時間Tue Aug 23 01:47:16 2005
Missing You
why?
I was attracted by you
at the first sight
Why?
You are in my heart
all the time
Why?
My memory always has
a girl dressed red
Why?
You are at the place
where I can't find
Why?
I saw you
when closing my eyes
Because
You'll always in my mind
Let me try
I'll take care of you
all my life
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這是好久以前的作品了(大概六年前吧XD不過我現在才升大四)很簡單的押韻詩:P
裡面有個red純粹是為了紀念那個女孩 不然改成white會更押韻XDD
閒晃看到有這個版 於是就斗膽PO過來了XD
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