作者leeeric (研究所...)
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标题[创作] missing you
时间Tue Aug 23 01:47:16 2005
Missing You
why?
I was attracted by you
at the first sight
Why?
You are in my heart
all the time
Why?
My memory always has
a girl dressed red
Why?
You are at the place
where I can't find
Why?
I saw you
when closing my eyes
Because
You'll always in my mind
Let me try
I'll take care of you
all my life
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这是好久以前的作品了(大概六年前吧XD不过我现在才升大四)很简单的押韵诗:P
里面有个red纯粹是为了纪念那个女孩 不然改成white会更押韵XDD
闲晃看到有这个版 於是就斗胆PO过来了XD
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