作者silencio1984 ()
看板poetry
標題[創作] The feast
時間Sun Apr 17 12:08:31 2005
Since the first debut I wonder
how luxuriant the feast to suffer
No more surging the luscious wine
but toxic waste to offer
Drift in the vast, thus I dare not pause
Though dare not, shouldn't have lost
Shower to decay, inject to demise
Deeply poisoned, soul of mine
請多指教!
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