作者silencio1984 ()
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标题[创作] The feast
时间Sun Apr 17 12:08:31 2005
Since the first debut I wonder
how luxuriant the feast to suffer
No more surging the luscious wine
but toxic waste to offer
Drift in the vast, thus I dare not pause
Though dare not, shouldn't have lost
Shower to decay, inject to demise
Deeply poisoned, soul of mine
请多指教!
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