作者Sammin (誠徵女友...)
看板poetry
標題[創作] The Road of Love
時間Tue Jan 13 01:23:07 2004
To hide my feeling or show,
in love, I would never know.
What is right and what is wrong?
I can't tell unless I'm getting strong.
My love blinds my eye,
just like playful clouds hide the moon,
thus, stars lose their way home.
My eyes want to cry,
'cause she can't see the one in fate soon.
Days and nights hope she will suddenly come.
To love makes me grow,
but it also brings me lots of sorrow.
For me, the road of love is sinuous and long.
As a stammer, sings a smooth and beautiful song.
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這首也是以前寫的作品...應該是我第一首開始押韻的Sonnet...
好一陣子沒提筆了...
大略看一下版上大大的作品...覺得各位都很厲害! ^^"
令小弟佩服不已...希望今年能開始找回創作sonnet的靈感...
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