作者Sammin (诚徵女友...)
看板poetry
标题[创作] The Road of Love
时间Tue Jan 13 01:23:07 2004
To hide my feeling or show,
in love, I would never know.
What is right and what is wrong?
I can't tell unless I'm getting strong.
My love blinds my eye,
just like playful clouds hide the moon,
thus, stars lose their way home.
My eyes want to cry,
'cause she can't see the one in fate soon.
Days and nights hope she will suddenly come.
To love makes me grow,
but it also brings me lots of sorrow.
For me, the road of love is sinuous and long.
As a stammer, sings a smooth and beautiful song.
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这首也是以前写的作品...应该是我第一首开始押韵的Sonnet...
好一阵子没提笔了...
大略看一下版上大大的作品...觉得各位都很厉害! ^^"
令小弟佩服不已...希望今年能开始找回创作sonnet的灵感...
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