作者Sammin (誠徵女友...)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Sleepless Night
時間Mon Jan 12 20:03:37 2004
I still can't sleep tonight,
For the happiness I've never had.
I try to build a fire,
A fire of love.
Brighten your life and mine.
Now and forever I won't change my mind.
No matter where you go, I'll always follow,
If you don't deny.
Whenever you call, I'll rest my sorrow,
If you spend your time.
To share your everything with me.
'cause your all I eager to see.
I'm waiting the most priceless thing in the world.
My dear, that's your love...
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多年前第一首sonnet的創作...寫這首時還不會押韻...
今天無意間發現這個版...
po出來跟大家分享分享...希望有人喜歡...^^
請多多指教...
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