作者Sammin (诚徵女友...)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Sleepless Night
时间Mon Jan 12 20:03:37 2004
I still can't sleep tonight,
For the happiness I've never had.
I try to build a fire,
A fire of love.
Brighten your life and mine.
Now and forever I won't change my mind.
No matter where you go, I'll always follow,
If you don't deny.
Whenever you call, I'll rest my sorrow,
If you spend your time.
To share your everything with me.
'cause your all I eager to see.
I'm waiting the most priceless thing in the world.
My dear, that's your love...
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多年前第一首sonnet的创作...写这首时还不会押韵...
今天无意间发现这个版...
po出来跟大家分享分享...希望有人喜欢...^^
请多多指教...
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