作者LiLian214 (LiLian214)
看板poetry
標題要怎麼唸才有波浪感?
時間Sat Mar 2 22:52:39 2002
On The Beach at Fontana
~~James Joyce
Wind whines and whines the shingle,
The crazy pierstakes groan;
A senile sea numbers eah single
Slimesilvered stone.
From whining wind and colder
Grey sea I wrap him warm
And touch his trembling fineboned shoulder
And boyish arm.
Around us fear, descending
Darkness of fear above
And in my heart how deep unending
Ache of love!
想請問各位前輩,這首詩是 dactylic 的吧...但要怎麼唸才會呈現出 wavy的感覺呢?
總覺得很拗口....
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