作者LiLian214 (LiLian214)
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标题要怎麽念才有波浪感?
时间Sat Mar 2 22:52:39 2002
On The Beach at Fontana
~~James Joyce
Wind whines and whines the shingle,
The crazy pierstakes groan;
A senile sea numbers eah single
Slimesilvered stone.
From whining wind and colder
Grey sea I wrap him warm
And touch his trembling fineboned shoulder
And boyish arm.
Around us fear, descending
Darkness of fear above
And in my heart how deep unending
Ache of love!
想请问各位前辈,这首诗是 dactylic 的吧...但要怎麽念才会呈现出 wavy的感觉呢?
总觉得很拗口....
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