作者Kej (狄倫電風扇)
看板Vocal
標題[分享&討鞭] 自創曲 : Make Things Right
時間Sun Sep 6 22:24:04 2009
最近開始練習自己寫歌練習自己錄 demo
這首歌試圖描寫的是
原本想要重新振作起來，讓事情重回常軌的人
在經過嘗試之後，發現還是無法改變現狀
於是只能繼續消沉的心情
不知道是不是我歌曲的 key 設定得不好
錄完之後聽了總會有種低音部份很難控制、很飄的感覺
我想應該還會有一些其他的問題
希望各位大大可以不吝指教 ^^
http://tw.streetvoice.com/music/user-song.asp?au=90101
附上歌詞：
yeah I've tried
to make things right
and I'm tired
pretend I was fine
honey do you believe
in this world that disguised
but I'm sure you'll gonna miss me
when I'm gone, tonight
how could you said that you never needed me
when you took everything from me
how could you shout that you try to help me
when you turn your heartless back on me
well now I'm praying
trying to settle my mind
and the fears now might be laid
or would it gone with time
how could you said that you never needed me
when you took everything from me
how could you shout that you try to help me
when you turn your heartless back on me
yeah I'm tired
to make things right
and now I'm trying
just pretend I was fine
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