作者Kej (狄伦电风扇)
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标题[分享&讨鞭] 自创曲 : Make Things Right
时间Sun Sep 6 22:24:04 2009
最近开始练习自己写歌练习自己录 demo
这首歌试图描写的是
原本想要重新振作起来，让事情重回常轨的人
在经过尝试之後，发现还是无法改变现状
於是只能继续消沉的心情
不知道是不是我歌曲的 key 设定得不好
录完之後听了总会有种低音部份很难控制、很飘的感觉
我想应该还会有一些其他的问题
希望各位大大可以不吝指教 ^^
http://tw.streetvoice.com/music/user-song.asp?au=90101
附上歌词：
yeah I've tried
to make things right
and I'm tired
pretend I was fine
honey do you believe
in this world that disguised
but I'm sure you'll gonna miss me
when I'm gone, tonight
how could you said that you never needed me
when you took everything from me
how could you shout that you try to help me
when you turn your heartless back on me
well now I'm praying
trying to settle my mind
and the fears now might be laid
or would it gone with time
how could you said that you never needed me
when you took everything from me
how could you shout that you try to help me
when you turn your heartless back on me
yeah I'm tired
to make things right
and now I'm trying
just pretend I was fine
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