※ 引述《JinSha (http://0rz.tw/h1hXC)》之銘言： 這次就很簡單跟原po討論一下我看到的問題，就不仔細改了，也不查經濟名詞 : 內需堪憂！元大寶華：民間消費成長速度緩慢恐成常態 : The prospects of domestic demand appear grim! Yuanta-Polaris: The slow growth : of domestic consumption would perhaps become a normality : 主計總處昨(25)日公布今(2013)年前4月實質平均薪資50562元，創近4年最低，元大寶華 : 綜合經濟研究院今(25)日指出，在國內外景氣改善速度緩慢、未來動向也撲朔迷離下，「 : 平均薪資的成長速度恐續緩」，又購買力持續受到物價上揚侵蝕，即便能期待廠商在景氣 : 倏忽好轉之際，採取發放非經常性薪資的方式獎勵受雇員工，但此一方式相對於經常性薪 : 資的提升而言，難穩定提升消費成長動能，「未來台灣民間消費成長速度緩慢恐將成為常 : 態」。 : The Directorate General of Budget, Accounting, and Statistics released : yesterday (25th) that the real wage of the first four months this year (2013) released [...] that 有點怪 : averages 50,562 dollars, hitting a new low in nearly four years. Today(25th), 英文 dollars 幾乎都是美元，台幣請寫 NT Dollars yesterday 跟 today 都是 25 號？這種明顯錯誤就算錯在原文都要改，讀者不會認為原 文有問題，只會認為譯者該死 : Yuanta-Polaris Research Institute pointed out that "the growth of average wage : would continue at a slow pace" due to the slowly improving domestic and : international economy and the bewildering future trends. Moreover, people's due to the 交代因果，所以一般 due to the 後面接的_名詞_ 是因 而你 due to the 後面接的名詞是 economy 跟 trends，但實際的因是"緩慢"跟"撲朔迷 離"，導致英文的因果交代不流暢 考慮改為 slow pace of [economy] and bewildering nature of [trends] 或是其他寫法 : purchasing power is eroded by rising prices. Even though firms can be expected : to adopt the policy of rewarding employees with non-regular wages as the : economy suddenly improves, this policy would not stably raise the momentum of : consumption growth compared to the growth of regular wages would do. "In the ^^^^^^^^^^^ as : future, the slow growth of domestic consumption in Taiwan would perhaps : become a normality. : 問題：不太清楚這裡的文法，就是"compared to the growth of regular wages"的後面 : a. 加would do的話文法正確嗎？ 我會把 do 砍掉 [A] would not [v.] as B would. : b. 若都不加，以句點結束這句，這樣文法正確嗎？ 不行 : c. 加does的話文法正確嗎？ 不行 : 與去年同期相比，4月工業及服務業受雇員工每人平均薪資增加1.11%至42011元，連續第3 : 個月成長，但經常性薪資僅增0.47%，主要是因非經常性薪資成長7.01%所帶動；而基本工 : 資雖調升1.42%，輕微提升約170萬勞工的收入，但只占受雇員工人數24%，其餘受雇者月 : 薪未能同時有較明顯調升。 : Compared to the same period last year, the average monthly wage of employees : in industrial and service sectors increases by 1.11% to 42,011 dollars in increased : April, a third consecutive month of growth. But the growth is mainly driven by was : the 7.01% growth in non-regular wage payments; average regular wage grows only : 0.47%. 上面一段我會用過去式，因為是在講4月的狀況，現在已經快七月了 : Although the 1.42% basic wage increase has slightly boosted about 1.7 : million workers' income, only 24% of all employees has been benefited; other : employees have not enjoyed a more significant raise in monthly pay. : 問題："the average monthly wage..in April increases by"的increase， : 用現在式對嗎，還是要用過去式increased呢? 我會用increased : 問題：But適合作為句子的開頭嗎，有沒有文法或常不常用的問題，還是沒差？ 嚴謹文章不可用 But 開頭，但現在英文越來越不嚴謹了。。。 : 問題：the 1.42% basic wage increase has slightly boosted about 1.7 : million workers' income這句中，"has boosted"的時態正確嗎，還是要改成 : boosts才對？以及has been benefited和 have not enjoyed的時態正確嗎？ 我會用had boosted, [had] benefited, had not enjoyed -- 'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve --

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