作者nick1119 (C大叔)
看板TigerBlue
標題[創作] 國境之南英文版(請鄉民們來找砸)
時間Thu Nov 13 21:15:34 2008
因為在創作時有一點精神不濟,英文的語氣或語法或許會有問題,但是請知道錯誤的鄉
民們幫幫忙,讓文章能正式完成,肛溫不盡 ^_^
如果海 會說話 如果風愛上砂
如果 有些想念遺忘在某個長假
If the sea could speak,
If the wind fall in love with sands,
If some missing which I owned left alone in a long vacation,
我會聆聽浪花 讓風吹過頭髮
任記憶裡的愛情在時間潮汐裡喧嘩
I would listen to waves whisper,
Let the breeze fall through my hair,
And let the love in my memory be roaring at old time.
非得等春天遠了夏天才近了
我是在回首時終於懂得
Until spring goes away and summer will come,
I understand all things
當陽光 再次 回到那 飄著雨的國境之南
我會試著把 那一年的故事 再接下去說完
When the sunshine returns once again in south of the border,
I will try to complete the story of that year.
當陽光 再次 離開那 太晴朗的國境之南
妳會不會把 妳曾帶走的愛 在告別前用微笑全歸還
When the sunshine leave once again form the parts in sunny south of the border,
When We say good bye to each other , Can Yor give back the love which you given in the past
海很藍 星光燦爛 我仍空著我的臂彎
天很寬 在我獨自唱歌的夜晚
Ocean is blue and starlight is still shinning
I am still keeping my arms empty,
At lonely night I feel Sky wide and starlight is shining
請原諒我的愛 訴說的太緩慢
My dear Please forgive me to talk love so slowly
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1F:推 pp1877:你肛溫... (XDDDD 140.130.208.8 11/13 21:16
2F:推 Emeraldcat:po 虎爛板是因為被翻成台式英文嗎~~XDD123.195.123.186 11/13 21:34
3F:→ nick1119:應該吧.......不然樓上的鄉民有好提議嗎 218.173.207.74 11/13 21:48
4F:→ daizenka:太緩慢...如果原意是「太遲」的話,那 125.231.6.50 11/13 22:25
5F:→ daizenka:用too late 會否好點兒? 125.231.6.50 11/13 22:25
6F:推 Emeraldcat:n大抱歉, 我沒有惡意;123.195.123.186 11/13 22:26
7F:→ Emeraldcat:我只是想說這文應該po問板或英文板~123.195.123.186 11/13 22:26
8F:推 Emeraldcat:如果是我,123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
9F:→ Emeraldcat:就第一大段could speak會改用says123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
10F:→ Emeraldcat:"fall in love"->"loves"123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
11F:→ Emeraldcat: (如果不照字面翻我會用encounters)123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
12F:→ Emeraldcat:missing->solicitude,123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
13F:→ Emeraldcat:left alone->was lost123.195.123.186 11/13 22:32
14F:推 Emeraldcat:然後刪掉一些贅字123.195.123.186 11/13 22:33
15F:推 Emeraldcat:if the ocean could say,123.195.123.186 11/13 22:45
16F:→ Emeraldcat:if the wind encounters the sand,123.195.123.186 11/13 22:45
17F:→ Emeraldcat:if the solicitude was lost123.195.123.186 11/13 22:45
18F:→ Emeraldcat: in the vacation days.123.195.123.186 11/13 22:46
19F:→ Emeraldcat:........123.195.123.186 11/13 22:46