作者nick1119 (C大叔)
看板TigerBlue
标题[创作] 国境之南英文版(请乡民们来找砸)
时间Thu Nov 13 21:15:34 2008
因为在创作时有一点精神不济,英文的语气或语法或许会有问题,但是请知道错误的乡
民们帮帮忙,让文章能正式完成,肛温不尽 ^_^
如果海 会说话 如果风爱上砂
如果 有些想念遗忘在某个长假
If the sea could speak,
If the wind fall in love with sands,
If some missing which I owned left alone in a long vacation,
我会聆听浪花 让风吹过头发
任记忆里的爱情在时间潮汐里喧哗
I would listen to waves whisper,
Let the breeze fall through my hair,
And let the love in my memory be roaring at old time.
非得等春天远了夏天才近了
我是在回首时终於懂得
Until spring goes away and summer will come,
I understand all things
当阳光 再次 回到那 飘着雨的国境之南
我会试着把 那一年的故事 再接下去说完
When the sunshine returns once again in south of the border,
I will try to complete the story of that year.
当阳光 再次 离开那 太晴朗的国境之南
你会不会把 你曾带走的爱 在告别前用微笑全归还
When the sunshine leave once again form the parts in sunny south of the border,
When We say good bye to each other , Can Yor give back the love which you given in the past
海很蓝 星光灿烂 我仍空着我的臂弯
天很宽 在我独自唱歌的夜晚
Ocean is blue and starlight is still shinning
I am still keeping my arms empty,
At lonely night I feel Sky wide and starlight is shining
请原谅我的爱 诉说的太缓慢
My dear Please forgive me to talk love so slowly
--
C大叔的寂寞部屋,欢迎乡民来踢馆,但请小力一点,以免有人受伤 XD
http://www.wretch.cc/blog/cyc1119
--
※ 发信站: 批踢踢实业坊(ptt.cc)
◆ From: 218.173.207.74
1F:推 pp1877:你肛温... (XDDDD 140.130.208.8 11/13 21:16
2F:推 Emeraldcat:po 虎烂板是因为被翻成台式英文吗~~XDD123.195.123.186 11/13 21:34
3F:→ nick1119:应该吧.......不然楼上的乡民有好提议吗 218.173.207.74 11/13 21:48
4F:→ daizenka:太缓慢...如果原意是「太迟」的话,那 125.231.6.50 11/13 22:25
5F:→ daizenka:用too late 会否好点儿? 125.231.6.50 11/13 22:25
6F:推 Emeraldcat:n大抱歉, 我没有恶意;123.195.123.186 11/13 22:26
7F:→ Emeraldcat:我只是想说这文应该po问板或英文板~123.195.123.186 11/13 22:26
8F:推 Emeraldcat:如果是我,123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
9F:→ Emeraldcat:就第一大段could speak会改用says123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
10F:→ Emeraldcat:"fall in love"->"loves"123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
11F:→ Emeraldcat: (如果不照字面翻我会用encounters)123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
12F:→ Emeraldcat:missing->solicitude,123.195.123.186 11/13 22:31
13F:→ Emeraldcat:left alone->was lost123.195.123.186 11/13 22:32
14F:推 Emeraldcat:然後删掉一些赘字123.195.123.186 11/13 22:33
15F:推 Emeraldcat:if the ocean could say,123.195.123.186 11/13 22:45
16F:→ Emeraldcat:if the wind encounters the sand,123.195.123.186 11/13 22:45
17F:→ Emeraldcat:if the solicitude was lost123.195.123.186 11/13 22:45
18F:→ Emeraldcat: in the vacation days.123.195.123.186 11/13 22:46
19F:→ Emeraldcat:........123.195.123.186 11/13 22:46