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標題[題目] 這樣造句可以嗎？
時間Sun Apr 29 12:34:37 2018
雜誌要我用以下兩個詞造句
我試著造句，請教有哪裡需要修改或不通順的地方。
1.house 做動詞
This box houses a gift I will give my gf for a proposal.
2.of the time 造句
我感覺用的時機是在前面有提到過去的事，後面才可以用 of the time?
Although I don't have enough money to buy a fancy gift for my girl, I have the affection to her like the acient romantic poet of the time.
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1F：推 NenaPolyglot: 第一句ok , 文法有小錯誤 04/30 18:31
2F：推 NenaPolyglot: This box houses a gift (which, that) I will giv 04/30 18:35
3F：→ NenaPolyglot: e "to" my girlfriend for a proposal. 04/30 18:35
4F：推 NenaPolyglot: which/that省略，但少了間接受詞前的介系詞 “to” 04/30 18:37
5F：推 NenaPolyglot: 原 po 這兩句造句是相連的上下文嗎 04/30 18:39
6F：推 NenaPolyglot: “of the time” 是 “當代的” (for the time bei 04/30 18:44
7F：→ NenaPolyglot: ng)的意思, 除非文章脈絡是過去，才有“當時的” ( 04/30 18:44
8F：→ NenaPolyglot: at that time, back then)的意味 04/30 18:44
9F：推 NenaPolyglot: 但你的造句時間點是現在，語意和語用上不通，若依 04/30 18:48
10F：→ NenaPolyglot: 照原句無法使用 “of the time”, 頂多只能改寫成: 04/30 18:48
11F：推 NenaPolyglot: Although I don't have enough money to buy a fan 04/30 18:54
12F：→ NenaPolyglot: cy gift for my girlfriend, my affection for/ to 04/30 18:54
13F：→ NenaPolyglot: words her can only be rendered by romantic poet 04/30 18:54
14F：→ NenaPolyglot: s (/ in romantic poetry) in ancient times. 04/30 18:54
15F：推 NenaPolyglot: 如果原po 只是想用 “of the time”造句，不再侷限 04/30 18:57
16F：→ NenaPolyglot: 於girlfriend ，我的建議是改寫成: 04/30 18:57
17F：推 NenaPolyglot: History refers to the social, economic, politic 04/30 19:01
18F：→ NenaPolyglot: al and religious circumstances that existed in 04/30 19:01
19F：→ NenaPolyglot: the past, detailing events of the time (from wh 04/30 19:01
20F：→ NenaPolyglot: ich people of modern age draw lessons.) 04/30 19:01
21F：推 NenaPolyglot: 補充: Although I don't have enough money to buy 04/30 19:43
22F：→ NenaPolyglot: a fancy gift for my girlfriend, my affection f 04/30 19:43
23F：→ NenaPolyglot: or/towards her is comparable/ can be likened to 04/30 19:43
24F：→ NenaPolyglot: the poetry composed by romantic poets in ancie 04/30 19:43
25F：→ NenaPolyglot: nt times. 04/30 19:43