作者wellaihai (sdaslkmk)
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標題[請益] TPO49 獨立寫作分析的對象
時間Mon Dec 31 00:32:25 2018
各位好，TPO49獨立寫作的題目是:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long
period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many
new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
請問我的文章發展可以是:
"因為老朋友比新朋友好，原因XXX，所以維持舊友誼的能力比交新朋友重要"
還是一定要論述維持舊友誼的"能力本身"比交新朋友的"能力本身"重要?
比方說:"能維持舊友誼代表夠體貼，這比起強大的社交能力更讓人覺得可靠"
寫的當下我有想過用第二種，但總覺得這兩種能力滿缺乏可比性....
最後採用第一種，但擔心偏題，主題句如下:
First of all, the happiness with a friend comes from sharing memory. To be
specific, long-term friendships contain even more memory.
Secondly, happiness with friends means the help between each other when in
need. Old friends might help you more than new friends do when you are in
trouble.
Last but not least, the happiness with friends means getting along with each
other without tension.In general, I feel easier to hang out with
my old friends.
感謝各位的閱讀與回應
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※ 編輯: wellaihai (123.195.193.33), 12/31/2018 00:41:21
1F：推 uopsdod: 第一種比較適合。三個主題句都還滿不錯的， 12/31 01:42
2F：→ uopsdod: 但用字跟句型可能可以再改一下，語意有點不精確。 12/31 01:43
3F：推 JC1982: 個人淺見。題目的意思是「就能帶來的快樂來說，能維持友 12/31 14:24
4F：→ JC1982: 誼比能交新朋友重要」 12/31 14:24
5F：推 JC1982: 所以要抓種交友型態比較能帶給人快樂 12/31 14:26
6F：→ JC1982: *哪種 12/31 14:26
7F：推 JC1982: 是我的話主題句會以”people would feel happy/satisfied/ 12/31 14:33
8F：→ JC1982: content if xxx, and maintaining a long term friendship 12/31 14:33
9F：→ JC1982: would help/ achieve xxx” 12/31 14:33
感謝各位的意見!
※ 編輯: wellaihai (123.195.193.33), 01/01/2019 10:00:42