※ 引述《hsnudrum (寶寶加油喔!:))》之銘言： : Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather all year : long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times : a year. Which do you prefer? : Although there are many people, especially who live in tropical zone, think ^^^^^^^^ xxxxxxxxx ^those ^the : it would be better to live in the places that have the same wether all year weather : long. However, I prefer to live in where it has different wether in a year. ^^^^^^^^^^ 有兩個重複的問題 可以說"there are many people... who think"，或"many people... think"就好 再來"Although many people..., I prefer"跟"Many people.... However, I..." although跟however兩個只能選一個 注意逗號與句號的差別 第二句的中間句號改成分號更好 : Here is why. : First and foremost, I love to participate in different activities in different : seasons. For example, I would like to go ice skiing or to enjoy hot spring : in winter; do some water activities like surfing in summer; go mountain : traveling and biking in spring and fall. As living in the subtropical region, xx L ^^^^ : where does not have obvious difference between seasons, I always eager to there is no ^am ^^^ 這句可以用"Living in the subtropical region, (where there is...,) I..."句型 因為I am living in [some location] 所以可以說 Living in [some location], I 不需要加As在前面 : experience snowing in winter. I recall that once I went to America with my : friends in the winter of 2006, we had a lot of fun in playing snowboard in snowboarding : Denver. : Another important reason is that I can have different styles of clothing when : living under seasons. I can wear my favorite T-shirts and short pants in : summer, and wear beautiful sweaters and scarfs in winter. With different : clothing styles, I could develop different feelings and ideas in my life, : furthermore, I could develop my views of appreciating beauty. The most . F ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aesthetic sense or sense of aesthetics : typical example is that the world's greatest cloth designers always hold fashion designers : their clothing exhibitions in the most modern and fashion cities fashionable(形容詞) : like Toyko, Paris and New York, which all have different seasons in years. : Admittedly, some people who prefer to live in where its wethers are all the : same would hold the opinions the advantages of convenience. For example, you : don't have to worry about how to wear or to take the risk of getting a cold : under abruptly change of wether. However, for the reasons mentioned above, : I still would like to have different wethers in a year. correct spelling: "weather", several places Good, clear argument. Good organization. Excellent use of anecdotal example! -- 一個 學術英文寫作 領域的討論板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分組討論區 】 --> 11 國家研究院 政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 --

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