※ 引述《sakuravita ()》之銘言： : Plan of improving my English writing skill : To improve English writing skill needs two key elements: reading and ^^^^^ 用requires更漂亮。 : writing. Reading is essential for being the source of writing. When we want to 這一句其實這樣表達比較好： Reading is the foundation of writing. "essential for being..."這樣的用法我沒有看過。 : have acquaintance with a field of skill, we need to retrieve its source. It acquaint的用法應該是： When we want ot acquaint ourselves with... retrieve是「重新獲得」的意思，似乎不合這裡的文意。 另外，這句的its代替了什麼？field of skill嗎？ 可是要怎麼從技術領域的來源重新獲得東西？ 這句的邏輯不太通順喔。 : helps us to be more familiar with the usage of words, such as collocation. In : the meantime, reading can also increase our lexicon, which is useful in ^^^^^^^^^^^^^這裡用furthermore, besides之類的字應該更好 lexicon是指某個領域的全部詞彙或術語， 其實這邊應該用vocabulary : writing. If one has a fundamental background of reading, one can writes ^^^^^^^^^ 助動詞後不用變化喔 : proficiently. : Therefore, my plan of improving English writing is as follows: first, : reading reference books of writing, such as Style, Line by Line; and also : research guiding books, such as Writing Research Paper, MLA Handbook. These ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 可以直接用research guides : books offer me a direction how to write a good composition; and most important ^^^要加of ^^逗點即可 : of all, how to write a better thesis. Second, writing as possible as ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 這樣講很怪，我會說： Second, writing as much as possible. : I can. I joined the writing group on BBS, and also audited a writing class in 這兩句的時態上用現在式，甚至是現在進行式，會不會比較好？ : campus. In these participations, I can push myself to write. Moreover, there ^^^^用urge更好。 : are professionals, teacher and peers to cooperate with. In their assistance : and guidance, I can no more be blind to my own mistakes of writing. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^你想表達的是overlook這個字嗎？ "I won't overlook my mistakes of writing"? : （請多多指教，謝謝！） 加油～ --

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