※ 引述《sakuravita ()》之铭言： : Plan of improving my English writing skill : To improve English writing skill needs two key elements: reading and ^^^^^ 用requires更漂亮。 : writing. Reading is essential for being the source of writing. When we want to 这一句其实这样表达比较好： Reading is the foundation of writing. "essential for being..."这样的用法我没有看过。 : have acquaintance with a field of skill, we need to retrieve its source. It acquaint的用法应该是： When we want ot acquaint ourselves with... retrieve是「重新获得」的意思，似乎不合这里的文意。 另外，这句的its代替了什麽？field of skill吗？ 可是要怎麽从技术领域的来源重新获得东西？ 这句的逻辑不太通顺喔。 : helps us to be more familiar with the usage of words, such as collocation. In : the meantime, reading can also increase our lexicon, which is useful in ^^^^^^^^^^^^^这里用furthermore, besides之类的字应该更好 lexicon是指某个领域的全部词汇或术语， 其实这边应该用vocabulary : writing. If one has a fundamental background of reading, one can writes ^^^^^^^^^ 助动词後不用变化喔 : proficiently. : Therefore, my plan of improving English writing is as follows: first, : reading reference books of writing, such as Style, Line by Line; and also : research guiding books, such as Writing Research Paper, MLA Handbook. These ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 可以直接用research guides : books offer me a direction how to write a good composition; and most important ^^^要加of ^^逗点即可 : of all, how to write a better thesis. Second, writing as possible as ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 这样讲很怪，我会说： Second, writing as much as possible. : I can. I joined the writing group on BBS, and also audited a writing class in 这两句的时态上用现在式，甚至是现在进行式，会不会比较好？ : campus. In these participations, I can push myself to write. Moreover, there ^^^^用urge更好。 : are professionals, teacher and peers to cooperate with. In their assistance : and guidance, I can no more be blind to my own mistakes of writing. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^你想表达的是overlook这个字吗？ "I won't overlook my mistakes of writing"? : （请多多指教，谢谢！） 加油～ --

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