※ 引述《starterk (把智慧的火櫸傳遞下去)》之銘言： : Computer : Recently, scientists who are employed by the U.S. military create a brand were created 這句應該要過去式喔 : new machine with incredibly high calculation ability. Our first aim is to : teach the machine to calculate a path of parabolic curve. Although it is the path of a parabolic curve : still difficulty for us to operate it, I suppose that our new machine will : help the U.S. army to analyze more complexity calculation in future. U.S. Army是專有名詞要大寫; ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ calculation加s;前面擺adjective "more complex calculations" or "high-complexity calculations" : However, the current difficulty for us is that we need numbers of engineers a number of : to maintain the machine. Usually, the machine will be out of function for : a while every hour due to short-circuits or overheat of certain items. overheating 另外，用"components"取代"items"會不會比較適合? : Expect those drawbacks, I think the machine is a great invention in human ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ : history. 文法對了，句意上來說，用"one of the greatest inventions..."會更強一點。 --

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