※ 引述《starterk (把智慧的火榉传递下去)》之铭言： : Computer : Recently, scientists who are employed by the U.S. military create a brand were created 这句应该要过去式喔 : new machine with incredibly high calculation ability. Our first aim is to : teach the machine to calculate a path of parabolic curve. Although it is the path of a parabolic curve : still difficulty for us to operate it, I suppose that our new machine will : help the U.S. army to analyze more complexity calculation in future. U.S. Army是专有名词要大写; ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ calculation加s;前面摆adjective "more complex calculations" or "high-complexity calculations" : However, the current difficulty for us is that we need numbers of engineers a number of : to maintain the machine. Usually, the machine will be out of function for : a while every hour due to short-circuits or overheat of certain items. overheating 另外，用"components"取代"items"会不会比较适合? : Expect those drawbacks, I think the machine is a great invention in human ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ : history. 文法对了，句意上来说，用"one of the greatest inventions..."会更强一点。 --

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