作者chelseamiyu (未央)
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標題[心得] 英文作文及個人小技巧分享
時間Thu Jan 28 00:12:46 2010
這是我高二時寫的一篇心得文,當時老師要我們選一部動畫片觀賞,然後寫心得。
當時文筆不是很成熟,如果傷了大家的眼真的十分抱歉!
如果學弟妹特別想知道某一種文體的寫法(抒情,議論,記敘),也可以告訴我,
我會盡量寫一些架構和小技巧,雖然不是神人,但我有一顆熱誠的心和學弟妹分享,
也謝謝你們願意閱讀這篇文章!:)
Reflection: Spirited Away
第一段:簡單說明宮崎駿是誰、他的作品有何特色,
不用花太多篇幅介紹他的生平背景和豐功偉業,
因為我們的重點不是這個。
Hayao Miyazaki is a world-famous animator from Japan.
Not only because of his works are so spectacular,
but also because they feature on some special topics.
第二段:敘述一下故事內容,
宮崎駿大師都要花上幾小時的動畫才能表現的主題,
現在請你用最少的字,清楚而完整的表達出來,
從另一個角度看,這也是一種改寫和「縮寫」。
故事背景是什麼?主角在經歷這麼多事情後有什麼樣的轉變?
考驗你敘述的技巧囉。
'Spirited Away' is a mysterious story about a little girl
named Chihiro and her adventurous journey.
At first, she was a pampered child,
but she became a brave and determined young lady later.
In order to rescue her criminal parents from the hell,
she suffered much hardship during her journey.
Chihiro also had been through lots of fantastic things
that influenced her life,
including some good and wicked fairies that help her.
第三段:接下來是個人感想的部分,
要用真誠的話語打動評審老師的心,切忌唱高調、不食人間煙火。
不必擔心自己使用的單字太簡單、句型太初階、文法太淺白,
因為一顆誠懇的心遠勝天花亂墜的堆砌!
也要記得這裡寫下的感想還是要緊扣你的主題,
不能神隱少女寫一寫變成魔女宅急便,否則會讓人不知所云。
最後可以小小賣弄一下(只是「小小」!),
用一句名言佳句作結,但這有點冒險,
因為弄不好就會淪為掉書袋,
我套用馬丁路德博士的這句話,
不知道多少人用過,但我想應該不會太老套,
幸好老師很賞臉,說這句用在這裡恰到好處。
After watching this movie,
I was deeply touched by the marvelous plots.
Sometimes people are so greedy for profits that
they ignore something more important and more precious,
such as friendship, parental love and trust.
I would like to quote Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.,
to sum up with the inspiration of this movie—
"Our lives begin to end the day
we become silent about things that matter."
不好意思因為這台電腦有點問題,我明天再把重點上色:)
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