作者chelseamiyu (未央)
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标题[心得] 英文作文及个人小技巧分享
时间Thu Jan 28 00:12:46 2010
这是我高二时写的一篇心得文,当时老师要我们选一部动画片观赏,然後写心得。
当时文笔不是很成熟,如果伤了大家的眼真的十分抱歉!
如果学弟妹特别想知道某一种文体的写法(抒情,议论,记叙),也可以告诉我,
我会尽量写一些架构和小技巧,虽然不是神人,但我有一颗热诚的心和学弟妹分享,
也谢谢你们愿意阅读这篇文章!:)
Reflection: Spirited Away
第一段:简单说明宫崎骏是谁、他的作品有何特色,
不用花太多篇幅介绍他的生平背景和丰功伟业,
因为我们的重点不是这个。
Hayao Miyazaki is a world-famous animator from Japan.
Not only because of his works are so spectacular,
but also because they feature on some special topics.
第二段:叙述一下故事内容,
宫崎骏大师都要花上几小时的动画才能表现的主题,
现在请你用最少的字,清楚而完整的表达出来,
从另一个角度看,这也是一种改写和「缩写」。
故事背景是什麽?主角在经历这麽多事情後有什麽样的转变?
考验你叙述的技巧罗。
'Spirited Away' is a mysterious story about a little girl
named Chihiro and her adventurous journey.
At first, she was a pampered child,
but she became a brave and determined young lady later.
In order to rescue her criminal parents from the hell,
she suffered much hardship during her journey.
Chihiro also had been through lots of fantastic things
that influenced her life,
including some good and wicked fairies that help her.
第三段:接下来是个人感想的部分,
要用真诚的话语打动评审老师的心,切忌唱高调、不食人间烟火。
不必担心自己使用的单字太简单、句型太初阶、文法太浅白,
因为一颗诚恳的心远胜天花乱坠的堆砌!
也要记得这里写下的感想还是要紧扣你的主题,
不能神隐少女写一写变成魔女宅急便,否则会让人不知所云。
最後可以小小卖弄一下(只是「小小」!),
用一句名言佳句作结,但这有点冒险,
因为弄不好就会沦为掉书袋,
我套用马丁路德博士的这句话,
不知道多少人用过,但我想应该不会太老套,
幸好老师很赏脸,说这句用在这里恰到好处。
After watching this movie,
I was deeply touched by the marvelous plots.
Sometimes people are so greedy for profits that
they ignore something more important and more precious,
such as friendship, parental love and trust.
I would like to quote Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.,
to sum up with the inspiration of this movie—
"Our lives begin to end the day
we become silent about things that matter."
不好意思因为这台电脑有点问题,我明天再把重点上色:)
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