作者mydreamcome (八卦板塑化劑大師)
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標題Re: [問題] Cambridge７ Test3 的圖表？？
時間Sat Dec 29 18:40:05 2012
有寫錯敬請指正,謝謝!
Compared with the average price of housing in 1989,
Tokyo had a decrease of 7％ from 1990 to 1995.
However, the average price of housing had a increase of 2％
from 1996 to 2002.
Therefore, the average price of housing only had a decrease
of 5％.
※ 引述《narwhale (去死去死特攻隊長)》之銘言：
: 裡面關於東京的數據我不確定該怎麼表達
: 圖中的資訊大致是這樣:
: 和1989年的平均房價相比，
: 東京的1990-1995的平均房價下降7%，
: 但1996-2002的平均房價上升2%到只剩5%的下降。
: 由於是decrease升到最後仍然是decrease
: 我寫出來的句子自己看怎麼看都很彆扭，如下:
: Compared with the aerage house prices in 1989,
: Tokyeo had a dicrease of 7% in the mean between 1990 and 1995,
: followed by a increase of 2 % to the decrease of 5% in the mean between
: 1996 and 2002.
: 大家有沒有啥好點子啊，我腦袋打結了
: 另外，我能說-7% increase或者a increase of -7%嗎?
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1F：推 narwhale:感謝啊，分開來寫安全多了 12/29 19:00
2F：推 narwhale:我想一想後覺得第二句可能會誤解為1996-2002是+2% 12/29 19:21
3F：→ narwhale:However, the average price of housing had a increase 12/29 19:22
4F：→ narwhale:from the former stage(1996-1995) to the latter stage 12/29 19:24
5F：→ narwhale:(1996-2002). 12/29 19:25
6F：→ narwhale:囧，我的of 2%被吃掉了 12/29 19:26
7F：→ mydreamcome:抱歉我沒有圖表,是按你的敘述翻譯的,但是你的寫法... 12/29 22:38
8F：→ mydreamcome:from the former stage to the latter stage 12/29 22:39
9F：→ mydreamcome:圖表的表達真的這樣嗎? 12/29 22:39
10F：推 narwhale:圖表中沒有用到stage的說法，但是1996-1995是一條向下的 12/30 00:37
11F：→ narwhale:bar，水平線是1989年的平均房價，可以看出減少了7% 12/30 00:39
12F：→ narwhale:然後1996-2002是另一條水平線下的bar，降低5% 12/30 00:40
13F：→ narwhale:上三句的是1990-1995，筆誤。 12/30 00:41
14F：→ narwhale:總之1990-1995，以及1996-2002兩段時期的平均房價都是和 12/30 00:42
15F：→ narwhale:1989年比較。 12/30 00:43
16F：→ narwhale:所以我原先很困惑要怎麼表達這上升的2% 12/30 00:45
17F：推 narwhale:後來想想這由-7%到-5%增加的2%，應該要強調是兩個bar(兩 12/30 00:53
18F：→ narwhale:段時間的平均值的差距)不然會誤以為是和1989年比較 12/30 00:54
19F：→ narwhale:抱歉一開始沒表達清楚 12/30 00:55
20F：→ mydreamcome: OK! 12/30 20:46
21F：推 seseme:increase的不定冠詞要用an 01/05 16:19
22F：→ mydreamcome:感謝樓上的指正 要放的是an 非a 感謝 :) 01/06 00:59