作者mydreamcome (八卦板塑化剂大师)
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标题Re: [问题] Cambridge７ Test3 的图表？？
时间Sat Dec 29 18:40:05 2012
有写错敬请指正,谢谢!
Compared with the average price of housing in 1989,
Tokyo had a decrease of 7％ from 1990 to 1995.
However, the average price of housing had a increase of 2％
from 1996 to 2002.
Therefore, the average price of housing only had a decrease
of 5％.
※ 引述《narwhale (去死去死特攻队长)》之铭言：
: 里面关於东京的数据我不确定该怎麽表达
: 图中的资讯大致是这样:
: 和1989年的平均房价相比，
: 东京的1990-1995的平均房价下降7%，
: 但1996-2002的平均房价上升2%到只剩5%的下降。
: 由於是decrease升到最後仍然是decrease
: 我写出来的句子自己看怎麽看都很别扭，如下:
: Compared with the aerage house prices in 1989,
: Tokyeo had a dicrease of 7% in the mean between 1990 and 1995,
: followed by a increase of 2 % to the decrease of 5% in the mean between
: 1996 and 2002.
: 大家有没有啥好点子啊，我脑袋打结了
: 另外，我能说-7% increase或者a increase of -7%吗?
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1F：推 narwhale:感谢啊，分开来写安全多了 12/29 19:00
2F：推 narwhale:我想一想後觉得第二句可能会误解为1996-2002是+2% 12/29 19:21
3F：→ narwhale:However, the average price of housing had a increase 12/29 19:22
4F：→ narwhale:from the former stage(1996-1995) to the latter stage 12/29 19:24
5F：→ narwhale:(1996-2002). 12/29 19:25
6F：→ narwhale:囧，我的of 2%被吃掉了 12/29 19:26
7F：→ mydreamcome:抱歉我没有图表,是按你的叙述翻译的,但是你的写法... 12/29 22:38
8F：→ mydreamcome:from the former stage to the latter stage 12/29 22:39
9F：→ mydreamcome:图表的表达真的这样吗? 12/29 22:39
10F：推 narwhale:图表中没有用到stage的说法，但是1996-1995是一条向下的 12/30 00:37
11F：→ narwhale:bar，水平线是1989年的平均房价，可以看出减少了7% 12/30 00:39
12F：→ narwhale:然後1996-2002是另一条水平线下的bar，降低5% 12/30 00:40
13F：→ narwhale:上三句的是1990-1995，笔误。 12/30 00:41
14F：→ narwhale:总之1990-1995，以及1996-2002两段时期的平均房价都是和 12/30 00:42
15F：→ narwhale:1989年比较。 12/30 00:43
16F：→ narwhale:所以我原先很困惑要怎麽表达这上升的2% 12/30 00:45
17F：推 narwhale:後来想想这由-7%到-5%增加的2%，应该要强调是两个bar(两 12/30 00:53
18F：→ narwhale:段时间的平均值的差距)不然会误以为是和1989年比较 12/30 00:54
19F：→ narwhale:抱歉一开始没表达清楚 12/30 00:55
20F：→ mydreamcome: OK! 12/30 20:46
21F：推 seseme:increase的不定冠词要用an 01/05 16:19
22F：→ mydreamcome:感谢楼上的指正 要放的是an 非a 感谢 :) 01/06 00:59