作者Aeolia (大帥NN  NＩ
看板Hanson-Wu
標題Re: [問題] 不好意思 請幫我修改這些句子
時間Tue Jun 6 00:28:56 2006
經過一年的學習後.我已經是一個二年級生.
Having been studying for a year, I am a sophomore now.
我希望我在未來這四年可學到更多知識
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應該剩三年而已喔,除非延畢XDXD!!
I hope to acquire more knowledge in the coming three years.
也希望可以把英文學的更好.然後把他應用到生活週邊.
I also want to improve my English and use it well in my life.
可以的話也希望將來有機會能到美國去看一看
And I anticipate a possible opportunity to go to the United States.
最後希望可以好好的把大學四年給念完!
Finally, I wish to have a smooth college life.
這是我翻的版本,我的習慣是以精簡為主
不逐字翻譯只翻其義....參考參考囉^^!!
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