作者Aeolia (大帅NN  NＩ
看板Hanson-Wu
标题Re: [问题] 不好意思 请帮我修改这些句子
时间Tue Jun 6 00:28:56 2006
经过一年的学习後.我已经是一个二年级生.
Having been studying for a year, I am a sophomore now.
我希望我在未来这四年可学到更多知识
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应该剩三年而已喔,除非延毕XDXD!!
I hope to acquire more knowledge in the coming three years.
也希望可以把英文学的更好.然後把他应用到生活周边.
I also want to improve my English and use it well in my life.
可以的话也希望将来有机会能到美国去看一看
And I anticipate a possible opportunity to go to the United States.
最後希望可以好好的把大学四年给念完!
Finally, I wish to have a smooth college life.
这是我翻的版本,我的习惯是以精简为主
不逐字翻译只翻其义....参考参考罗^^!!
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