作者Jassiehs (Tanya不愧是我的心上人呀)
看板GMAT
標題[語文] pp2-SC-94
時間Tue Jun 2 18:40:27 2009
Even though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the
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fifteen recordings she made were disappointing artistically as well as
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technically, Olive Fremstad(1871-1951) has never been entirely forgotten
by opera aficionados.
(A) though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen
recordings she made were
(B) though her career was cut short while in her prime, with the fifteen
recordings she made
(C) as her career had been cut short when she was in her prime, with the
fifteen recordings she had made
(D) with her career having been cut short when she was in her prime, and the
fifteen recordings she made were
(E) with her career cut short while in her prime, and that the fifteen
recordings she made were
答案是A
在這邊想請教的是關於副詞子句省略的問題。
白勇語法裡說，while/when/although + 形容詞子句、-ing、-ed 才是正確的表達方式
如果while/when/although + 介係詞片語或名詞片語，則是錯誤省略
而在語法筆記裡，B這個選項的解釋為：
while in her prime是主動詞省略的形式，while前出現的句子主詞是her career，還原
到該句中為while her career was in her prime，邏輯含義不合理，應該是Olive
Fremstad本人in her prime。
想請問到底那一個說法是正確的?
雖然兩個說法我都可以理解，不過還是想要知道那一個是正確的。
謝謝大家。
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1F：推 Snew27:同問 06/02 18:55
2F：推 rogerkid:語文沒什麼正不正確的啦 不過如果主要子句跟副詞子句的主 06/05 22:32
3F：→ rogerkid:詞一致的話 省略的正當性就會強一點~~ 06/05 22:32
4F：→ rogerkid:不過我不喜歡白勇的說法 因為這樣的英文太無聊囉~~~ 06/05 22:33