作者Jassiehs (Tanya不愧是我的心上人呀)
看板GMAT
标题[语文] pp2-SC-94
时间Tue Jun 2 18:40:27 2009
Even though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the
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fifteen recordings she made were disappointing artistically as well as
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technically, Olive Fremstad(1871-1951) has never been entirely forgotten
by opera aficionados.
(A) though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen
recordings she made were
(B) though her career was cut short while in her prime, with the fifteen
recordings she made
(C) as her career had been cut short when she was in her prime, with the
fifteen recordings she had made
(D) with her career having been cut short when she was in her prime, and the
fifteen recordings she made were
(E) with her career cut short while in her prime, and that the fifteen
recordings she made were
答案是A
在这边想请教的是关於副词子句省略的问题。
白勇语法里说,while/when/although + 形容词子句、-ing、-ed 才是正确的表达方式
如果while/when/although + 介系词片语或名词片语,则是错误省略
而在语法笔记里,B这个选项的解释为:
while in her prime是主动词省略的形式,while前出现的句子主词是her career,还原
到该句中为while her career was in her prime,逻辑含义不合理,应该是Olive
Fremstad本人in her prime。
想请问到底那一个说法是正确的?
虽然两个说法我都可以理解,不过还是想要知道那一个是正确的。
谢谢大家。
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1F:推 Snew27:同问 06/02 18:55
2F:推 rogerkid:语文没什麽正不正确的啦 不过如果主要子句跟副词子句的主 06/05 22:32
3F:→ rogerkid:词一致的话 省略的正当性就会强一点~~ 06/05 22:32
4F:→ rogerkid:不过我不喜欢白勇的说法 因为这样的英文太无聊罗~~~ 06/05 22:33