作者iammarsman (GMAT)
看板GMAT
標題[語文] PP2-223
時間Wed Jan 14 00:37:20 2009
After several years of rapid growth, the health care company became one of
the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area,
while it then
proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in
its payment to doctors and hospitals.
A. while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling
months behind in its payment to
B. while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business and fell
months behind in its payment to
E. but then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months
behind in paying
答案是E
想請教一下AB是錯在哪邊呢？
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1F：→ svg29635:it 出問題嗎?! 我認為啦 01/14 08:10
2F：推 richertkk:it指代不清.. 01/14 20:36
3F：推 booom:1)while引導的是從屬子句,表示其為次要,不甚合句義 01/15 14:30
4F：→ booom:2)AB較不簡潔 ("in its payment to" vs "in paying") 01/15 14:32
5F：→ booom:3)老莫: 代名詞當主詞,優先代替原句主詞 01/15 14:33
6F：→ booom: 故AB用it勉強說得過去, 但E避用it使句義更清楚, 故較佳 01/15 14:35
7F：→ booom:結論: AB沒有大錯, 只是E更好, 所以選E 01/15 14:36
8F：→ iammarsman:謝謝樓上諸位大大，感激不盡！:) 01/15 21:36