作者iammarsman (GMAT)
看板GMAT
标题[语文] PP2-223
时间Wed Jan 14 00:37:20 2009
After several years of rapid growth, the health care company became one of
the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area,
while it then
proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in
its payment to doctors and hospitals.
A. while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling
months behind in its payment to
B. while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business and fell
months behind in its payment to
E. but then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months
behind in paying
答案是E
想请教一下AB是错在哪边呢？
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1F：→ svg29635:it 出问题吗?! 我认为啦 01/14 08:10
2F：推 richertkk:it指代不清.. 01/14 20:36
3F：推 booom:1)while引导的是从属子句,表示其为次要,不甚合句义 01/15 14:30
4F：→ booom:2)AB较不简洁 ("in its payment to" vs "in paying") 01/15 14:32
5F：→ booom:3)老莫: 代名词当主词,优先代替原句主词 01/15 14:33
6F：→ booom: 故AB用it勉强说得过去, 但E避用it使句义更清楚, 故较佳 01/15 14:35
7F：→ booom:结论: AB没有大错, 只是E更好, 所以选E 01/15 14:36
8F：→ iammarsman:谢谢楼上诸位大大，感激不尽！:) 01/15 21:36