這篇是回應灰鷹大解釋他冰與火之歌第二部為什麼花了較長時間來翻譯的文章 為什麼我不包含原文內容，是因為我才正在看第二本的原文書，剛看過他範例 裡面舉的段落的章節，所以想打出來給大家看。希望大家自己試試看翻譯這兩 段，然後回去灰鷹大的文章#1E_yciH7，去比較一下，大家就會發現這是多麼艱 難的一個工作。 好，大家來試試看吧！ I、 "It is customary to grant a king the style <i>Your Grace</i>," announced Lord Florent. A red gold fox poked its shining snout out from his breastplate through a circle of lapis lazuli flowers. Very tall, very courtly, and very rich, the Lord of Brightwater Keep had been the first of Renly's bannermen to declare for Stannis, and the first to renounce his old gods and take up the Lord of Light. Stannis had left his queen on Dragonstone along with her uncle Axell, but the queen's men were more numerous and powerful than ever, and Alester Florent was the foremost. <i></i>中間是斜體字。為了幫助理解，我稍微講解一下這邊的情況。 怕雷的人趕快出去不要看了。其實不是影響大局的部份。 （Davos去見Stannis） Davos幾乎都要忘記Storm's End城牆近看有多高聳。Stannis王停在城牆前，距離 Ser Cortnay和他的舉旗人只有幾呎。"Ser[對騎士的稱謂]", 他(Davos)僵硬地 說。他沒有要下馬的意思。 "大人。(My lord.)" (Stannis回應)這次更沒禮貌，但是是預料之內的回應。 接下來就接範例的段落 II、 The passage was navigable only during high tide, and was never less than treacherous, but his smuggler's skills had not deserted him. Davos threaded their way deftly between the jagged rocks until the cave mouth loomed up before them. He let the waves carry them inside. They crashed around him, slamming the boat this way and that and soaking them to the skin. A half-seen finger of rock came rushing up out of the gloom, snarling foam, and Davos barely kept them off it with an oar. 同樣解釋一下這邊的情況。Davos駕著一艘小船載著某人在月黑風高的時候從海 面逼進一個城堡。 Enjoy! --

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