这篇是回应灰鹰大解释他冰与火之歌第二部为什麽花了较长时间来翻译的文章 为什麽我不包含原文内容，是因为我才正在看第二本的原文书，刚看过他范例 里面举的段落的章节，所以想打出来给大家看。希望大家自己试试看翻译这两 段，然後回去灰鹰大的文章#1E_yciH7，去比较一下，大家就会发现这是多麽艰 难的一个工作。 好，大家来试试看吧！ I、 "It is customary to grant a king the style <i>Your Grace</i>," announced Lord Florent. A red gold fox poked its shining snout out from his breastplate through a circle of lapis lazuli flowers. Very tall, very courtly, and very rich, the Lord of Brightwater Keep had been the first of Renly's bannermen to declare for Stannis, and the first to renounce his old gods and take up the Lord of Light. Stannis had left his queen on Dragonstone along with her uncle Axell, but the queen's men were more numerous and powerful than ever, and Alester Florent was the foremost. <i></i>中间是斜体字。为了帮助理解，我稍微讲解一下这边的情况。 怕雷的人赶快出去不要看了。其实不是影响大局的部份。 （Davos去见Stannis） Davos几乎都要忘记Storm's End城墙近看有多高耸。Stannis王停在城墙前，距离 Ser Cortnay和他的举旗人只有几尺。"Ser[对骑士的称谓]", 他(Davos)僵硬地 说。他没有要下马的意思。 "大人。(My lord.)" (Stannis回应)这次更没礼貌，但是是预料之内的回应。 接下来就接范例的段落 II、 The passage was navigable only during high tide, and was never less than treacherous, but his smuggler's skills had not deserted him. Davos threaded their way deftly between the jagged rocks until the cave mouth loomed up before them. He let the waves carry them inside. They crashed around him, slamming the boat this way and that and soaking them to the skin. A half-seen finger of rock came rushing up out of the gloom, snarling foam, and Davos barely kept them off it with an oar. 同样解释一下这边的情况。Davos驾着一艘小船载着某人在月黑风高的时候从海 面逼进一个城堡。 Enjoy! --

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