作者istee (istee)
看板Eng-Class
標題[請益] 請問英文自我介紹
時間Wed Aug 14 13:43:46 2019
各位版大好：
由於小妹最近剛碩士畢業，需要找工作，想找有關科技業外商的工作，因此需要英文自傳，但不確定自己寫的好不好，已經有利用google, netspeak等網頁查看有無錯誤的部分，希望各位大大能給些意見，謝謝大家。
My name is I-Ju Wang, and I was born in 1993. I graduated from Chiao Tung University where I majored in Material Science in master degree.
There are four members of my family. My father is a store owner, so I need to interact with people when I was young. It lets me become a social person. My mother is an accountant in the travel agency and is also my role model. I learned from her that if I worked hard, I won't regret anything. And I have a younger brother, we can give each other advice when we're going through hard times.
In college, I took part in many public benefit activities; For example, I joined beach cleaning and mountain cleaning activities. It not only keeps our environment clean but also makes me feel good. To cultivate a sense of responsibility, I volunteered to be a class leader and a badminton vice captain. With these experiences, I became more energetic and was able to work under pressure.
After I graduated from college, I worked at the National Synchrotron Radiation Research Center for one year. During this time, I can conduct beamline experiments, design experiments and solve problems by myself. These experiences sparked my interest in doing research, so I decided to study for a master's degree to improve my research ability.
During my Masters, my topic was "Tuning residual stress in highly (111)-oriented nanotwinned Cu". I learned a lot of skills such as electroplating, electropolishing, annealing, and carrying out high vacuum systems and vacuum cavity cleaning. At first none of my experiments working, I was under a lot of pressure. I tried to find the resolution of my experiment and worked around the clock. Fortunately, I found the method of solving the problems and was able to finish my thesis. Trouble shooting gave
me a sense of achievement and made me want to work in the tech industry.
In addition, I possess some experiences related to semiconductors. I participated in the semiconductor equipment course and realized how to operate the semiconductor equipment. I also experienced in electroplating wafers in a technology corporation. These experiences let me have the basic knowledge of semiconductors.
In order to enhance myself, I got many kinds of certificates like TQC-EXCEL 2010, C-level coach of badminton, 7th piano verification, technician for fixed crane operation, etc. I believe that I am a versatile person who can learn and adjust to anything. If I have a chance to work in your company, I would appreciate it so much and make an all-out effort.
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※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.218 臺灣), 08/14/2019 13:48:31
1F：→ hlin12: 你中文面試會說: 我出生XX年？我家裡有X個人嗎？ 08/14 17:36
2F：→ lesautres: 推樓上，其實大多數時候不是英文的問題 08/14 21:16
3F：→ bloedchen: 他也沒說是面試時的講稿，可能只是公司要求附上的文件 08/15 09:01
4F：→ hlin12: 重點不在是講稿還是文件，而是在於講出生幾年，家裡幾個 08/15 11:39
5F：→ hlin12: 人，對於你應徵上有優勢？ 08/15 11:39
6F：推 posen2012: 同意一樓…講重點 經驗 興趣 目標 期望 整理好再翻英 08/15 13:03
了解，還以為那個家庭成員是必需，因為看網路上自傳範本都有就跟著寫了，謝謝大家的建議。
※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.218 臺灣), 08/15/2019 13:25:21
7F：→ posen2012: 就是盡可能在簡短的介紹中讓人瞭解自己的優點 大多主管 08/15 14:09
8F：→ posen2012: 都很忙 08/15 14:09
9F：推 discosoul: 阿滴英文有一篇不錯啊 08/15 14:49
10F：推 cuylerLin: 主詞也不要用太多I開頭，一搜尋不得了發現有29個... 08/16 00:58
11F：→ cuylerLin: 沒有細看，不過第二段講家人可以整個砍掉，然後最後一 08/16 00:59
12F：→ cuylerLin: 段有許多感覺跟你應徵外商無關的經歷都拿掉就是了... 08/16 01:00
13F：→ cuylerLin: 整體的話文法錯誤滿多的...不過也許你先把架構清楚化 08/16 01:01
14F：→ cuylerLin: 起來再來修文法會是比較好的方式 08/16 01:02
15F：→ cuylerLin: 外商建議用CV or cover letter(不同國家不同稱呼)架構 08/16 01:05
16F：→ cuylerLin: 來寫會比一整篇要人家重頭看到尾好得多，特別還要看流 08/16 01:05
17F：→ cuylerLin: 水帳與錯誤文法，舉例：你講碩論那段，就可以條列貢獻 08/16 01:07
18F：→ cuylerLin: 與應徵公司的連結，也會更清楚，講skills那邊不需要丟 08/16 01:08
19F：→ cuylerLin: 一堆抽象名詞，直接列舉你做了什麼in layman's terms 08/16 01:10
20F：→ cuylerLin: 學會半導體器材那邊也可以明確講出學會了什麼型號功能 08/16 01:11
21F：→ cuylerLin: 這樣會直接凸顯你相較於其他人的優勢，直接看出鑑別度 08/16 01:12
22F：→ cuylerLin: 大致上這樣，沒有太多時間就不一一細看了，祝工作順利 08/16 01:13
好的，真的非常感謝您!!!
※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.219 臺灣), 08/19/2019 11:46:58