作者piliwu (I'm yours)
看板EmailYang
標題[閒聊] 喜妹要的造句:Lamb Hot Pot
時間Tue Jul 31 23:22:44 2012
As Jamie wish, i thought a poem mins ago.
and it goes:
Lamb hot pot touches my nose with smell,
touches my mouth with temperature,
touches my heart with delicacy.
You catch my eyes as the stars twinkle on the glacier,
you catch my eyes as the moon shines in the river,
you catch my eyes as the sun lightens to the lover,
you catch my eyes as Mei...
by Rudolph
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1F：推 daisukiryo:還偷偷告白 ☆_☆ 07/31 23:30
2F：推 SpartanB:Good poem!! 07/31 23:31
3F：→ piliwu:為了符合本版版旨硬加了一句很突兀的結尾... 07/31 23:31
4F：→ SpartanB:結尾沒押韻 07/31 23:32
5F：推 daisukiryo:放在第三句就可以不用押韻了(欸? 07/31 23:33
6F：推 Brad255:好詩好詩 07/31 23:35
7F：→ Brad255:我記得英詩好像有2244 還是啥規則的@@ 07/31 23:36
8F：→ Brad255:之前為了泡妞 還研究了一下(?) 07/31 23:37
9F：推 s75287:英詩2244 那5566是....? 07/31 23:39
10F：推 Brad255: 宇宙天團 07/31 23:39
11F：→ piliwu:完全沒研究過,洗澡時隨便想的,大家該睡覺了~ 07/31 23:42
12F：推 Brad255:晚安 07/31 23:45
13F：推 wqchung:lamb pot~~ 07/31 23:55
14F：→ hjchang:好濕好濕 08/01 09:45