作者piliwu (I'm yours)
看板EmailYang
标题[闲聊] 喜妹要的造句:Lamb Hot Pot
时间Tue Jul 31 23:22:44 2012
As Jamie wish, i thought a poem mins ago.
and it goes:
Lamb hot pot touches my nose with smell,
touches my mouth with temperature,
touches my heart with delicacy.
You catch my eyes as the stars twinkle on the glacier,
you catch my eyes as the moon shines in the river,
you catch my eyes as the sun lightens to the lover,
you catch my eyes as Mei...
by Rudolph
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1F：推 daisukiryo:还偷偷告白 ☆_☆ 07/31 23:30
2F：推 SpartanB:Good poem!! 07/31 23:31
3F：→ piliwu:为了符合本版版旨硬加了一句很突兀的结尾... 07/31 23:31
4F：→ SpartanB:结尾没押韵 07/31 23:32
5F：推 daisukiryo:放在第三句就可以不用押韵了(欸? 07/31 23:33
6F：推 Brad255:好诗好诗 07/31 23:35
7F：→ Brad255:我记得英诗好像有2244 还是啥规则的@@ 07/31 23:36
8F：→ Brad255:之前为了泡妞 还研究了一下(?) 07/31 23:37
9F：推 s75287:英诗2244 那5566是....? 07/31 23:39
10F：推 Brad255: 宇宙天团 07/31 23:39
11F：→ piliwu:完全没研究过,洗澡时随便想的,大家该睡觉了~ 07/31 23:42
12F：推 Brad255:晚安 07/31 23:45
13F：推 wqchung:lamb pot~~ 07/31 23:55
14F：→ hjchang:好湿好湿 08/01 09:45