※ 引述《friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)》之銘言： : 因為我有一堂課英文聽講，老師要大家上台介紹一個事物三分鐘 : 於是我想介紹老師給大家認識 : 剛剛寫好了介紹稿，只是英文不好的我一定有很多錯誤 : 希望大家能幫我指正一下 : My Favorite Singer Cheer : Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陳綺 : 貞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she : write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other : singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and : they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she : performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is : like a picture”. 第一段是基本介紹.... 有一些文法上的問題，可能還需要修很多。 然後選字例如介紹伍佰，應該用artist會比people更好 大略也是英文使用上的問題 還有句子可以再簡要一點點 就會很好了 （後面的段落也是類似英文問題） : Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse : inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also : like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some : articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just : like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to : do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much. 旅行的意義翻得怪怪的 The Meaning of Travel會不會好一點= =? 你可以提一下她的歌詞意境 音樂的多樣性與獨特性 : Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the : Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her : voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening : in midnight 你可以再多提一點你自己聽陳綺貞音樂與現場的感覺（或說感動） 例如對我來講 陳綺貞第一張專輯陪我度過最苦悶的高三生活 現在我聽到這張專輯 都還常想起很多年前的那種感動 : I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too. : And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you. : 我真的英文很差><... : 請大家多多指正 （可以偷偷的笑我沒關係 > <".... 我很努力寫了） 加油啦～ --

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