作者stone1980 (塔里的男孩 ks)
看板Cheer
标题Re: [疑问] 想请大家帮个忙
时间Mon Nov 27 00:35:03 2006
※ 引述《friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)》之铭言:
: 因为我有一堂课英文听讲,老师要大家上台介绍一个事物三分钟
: 於是我想介绍老师给大家认识
: 刚刚写好了介绍稿,只是英文不好的我一定有很多错误
: 希望大家能帮我指正一下
: My Favorite Singer Cheer
: Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陈绮
: 贞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she
: write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other
: singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and
: they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she
: performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is
: like a picture”.
第一段是基本介绍....
有一些文法上的问题,可能还需要修很多。
然後选字例如介绍伍佰,应该用artist会比people更好
大略也是英文使用上的问题
还有句子可以再简要一点点 就会很好了
(後面的段落也是类似英文问题)
: Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse
: inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also
: like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some
: articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just
: like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to
: do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much.
旅行的意义翻得怪怪的 The Meaning of Travel会不会好一点= =?
你可以提一下她的歌词意境 音乐的多样性与独特性
: Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the
: Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her
: voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening
: in midnight
你可以再多提一点你自己听陈绮贞音乐与现场的感觉(或说感动)
例如对我来讲 陈绮贞第一张专辑陪我度过最苦闷的高三生活
现在我听到这张专辑 都还常想起很多年前的那种感动
: I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too.
: And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you.
: 我真的英文很差><...
: 请大家多多指正 (可以偷偷的笑我没关系 > <".... 我很努力写了)
加油啦~
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1F:推 marsu:因为绮贞是命名为Travel is meaningful吧?! 呵 11/27 00:36
2F:→ stone1980:是喔....这翻译真的怪怪的,但当然还是以原作者为主:) 11/27 00:37
3F:→ marsu:嗯我也觉得伍佰可以用artist比较好~! 11/27 00:42
4F:→ friendalvin:我是看老师英文命名叫 Travel is meaningful 11/27 00:46
5F:→ friendalvin:不过谢谢你的建议^^" 11/27 00:46
6F:→ wavelin:那补注一个英文基本该注意的 时态和单复数要统一一致 11/27 00:59
7F:→ wavelin:ex: her song"s"...因为不只一首喔^^ 11/27 01:02