※ 引述《friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)》之铭言： : 因为我有一堂课英文听讲，老师要大家上台介绍一个事物三分钟 : 於是我想介绍老师给大家认识 : 刚刚写好了介绍稿，只是英文不好的我一定有很多错误 : 希望大家能帮我指正一下 : My Favorite Singer Cheer : Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陈绮 : 贞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she : write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other : singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and : they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she : performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is : like a picture”. 第一段是基本介绍.... 有一些文法上的问题，可能还需要修很多。 然後选字例如介绍伍佰，应该用artist会比people更好 大略也是英文使用上的问题 还有句子可以再简要一点点 就会很好了 （後面的段落也是类似英文问题） : Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse : inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also : like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some : articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just : like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to : do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much. 旅行的意义翻得怪怪的 The Meaning of Travel会不会好一点= =? 你可以提一下她的歌词意境 音乐的多样性与独特性 : Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the : Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her : voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening : in midnight 你可以再多提一点你自己听陈绮贞音乐与现场的感觉（或说感动） 例如对我来讲 陈绮贞第一张专辑陪我度过最苦闷的高三生活 现在我听到这张专辑 都还常想起很多年前的那种感动 : I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too. : And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you. : 我真的英文很差><... : 请大家多多指正 （可以偷偷的笑我没关系 > <".... 我很努力写了） 加油啦～ --

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