※ 引述《friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)》之銘言： : 因為我有一堂課英文聽講，老師要大家上台介紹一個事物三分鐘 : 於是我想介紹老師給大家認識 : 剛剛寫好了介紹稿，只是英文不好的我一定有很多錯誤 : 希望大家能幫我指正一下 : My Favorite Singer Cheer : Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陳綺 : 貞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she 我第一個想到的是 creative takes plays : write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other writes : singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and singers(to sing可省) concerts較通俗? : they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she an : performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is person : like a picture”. : Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse likes : inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also : like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some likes XXXX : articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just writing : like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to : do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much. with? : Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^was studying/studied : Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her sing? : voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening makes and XXXX very much to listen : in midnight at? : I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too. : And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you. : 我真的英文很差><... : 請大家多多指正 （可以偷偷的笑我沒關係 > <".... 我很努力寫了） 哈我英文也不好啦 只能改一下文法的小錯誤 整體就不動了 不知道你年紀 也不能亂改 哈 有問號的地方是我也不太確定是不是一定要那樣用 還得請版上有外文系的強者出來幫你囉 --

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