※ 引述《friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)》之铭言： : 因为我有一堂课英文听讲，老师要大家上台介绍一个事物三分钟 : 於是我想介绍老师给大家认识 : 刚刚写好了介绍稿，只是英文不好的我一定有很多错误 : 希望大家能帮我指正一下 : My Favorite Singer Cheer : Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陈绮 : 贞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she 我第一个想到的是 creative takes plays : write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other writes : singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and singers(to sing可省) concerts较通俗? : they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she an : performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is person : like a picture”. : Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse likes : inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also : like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some likes XXXX : articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just writing : like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to : do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much. with? : Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^was studying/studied : Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her sing? : voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening makes and XXXX very much to listen : in midnight at? : I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too. : And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you. : 我真的英文很差><... : 请大家多多指正 （可以偷偷的笑我没关系 > <".... 我很努力写了） 哈我英文也不好啦 只能改一下文法的小错误 整体就不动了 不知道你年纪 也不能乱改 哈 有问号的地方是我也不太确定是不是一定要那样用 还得请版上有外文系的强者出来帮你罗 --

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