作者marsu (*Cheer&takako*大心*)
看板Cheer
标题Re: [疑问] 想请大家帮个忙
时间Mon Nov 27 00:27:35 2006
※ 引述《friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)》之铭言:
: 因为我有一堂课英文听讲,老师要大家上台介绍一个事物三分钟
: 於是我想介绍老师给大家认识
: 刚刚写好了介绍稿,只是英文不好的我一定有很多错误
: 希望大家能帮我指正一下
: My Favorite Singer Cheer
: Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陈绮
: 贞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she
我第一个想到的是 creative takes plays
: write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other
writes
: singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and
singers(to sing可省) concerts较通俗?
: they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she
an
: performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is
person
: like a picture”.
: Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse
likes
: inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also
: like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some
likes XXXX
: articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just
writing
: like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to
: do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much.
with?
: Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^was studying/studied
: Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her
sing?
: voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening
makes and XXXX very much to
listen
: in midnight
at?
: I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too.
: And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you.
: 我真的英文很差><...
: 请大家多多指正 (可以偷偷的笑我没关系 > <".... 我很努力写了)
哈我英文也不好啦
只能改一下文法的小错误
整体就不动了
不知道你年纪 也不能乱改 哈
有问号的地方是我也不太确定是不是一定要那样用
还得请版上有外文系的强者出来帮你罗
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※ 编辑: marsu 来自: 202.178.206.183 (11/27 00:28)
1F:推 friendalvin:我我我… 我是大一生 /_\ 我是中文系> <"... 11/27 00:32
2F:推 cutemitten:the meaning of travel 旅行的意义 11/27 12:38