作者friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)
看板Cheer
標題[疑問] 想請大家幫個忙
時間Mon Nov 27 00:06:40 2006
因為我有一堂課英文聽講,老師要大家上台介紹一個事物三分鐘
於是我想介紹老師給大家認識
剛剛寫好了介紹稿,只是英文不好的我一定有很多錯誤
希望大家能幫我指正一下
My Favorite Singer Cheer
Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陳綺
貞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she
write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other
singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and
they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she
performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is
like a picture”.
Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse
inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also
like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some
articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just
like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to
do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much.
Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the
Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her
voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening
in midnight
I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too.
And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you.
我真的英文很差><...
請大家多多指正 (可以偷偷的笑我沒關係 > <".... 我很努力寫了)
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※ 編輯: friendalvin 來自: 124.8.82.36 (11/27 00:07)
1F:推 mandyshaq:creationary→creative 11/27 00:21
2F:推 sav321: 音樂放出來就對了!有什麼好介紹的!XD 11/27 00:22
3F:推 SunDoll:我之前也曾被老師叫上去講~但因為是臨時的,講不太出個所以 11/27 00:22
4F:→ SunDoll:然..好像有一些些小文法錯誤吧^^"但我指正的不太好~"~ 11/27 00:23
5F:推 stone1980:還好你最後有播歌~ 不管講怎樣 都有仙女下凡來解救 ^^y 11/27 00:36
6F:推 friendalvin:不管缺點再怎麼多…老師的歌都可以挽救我的缺失^^" 11/27 00:45
7F:推 smartfen:同二樓!!放出來之後說:Just listen to the music. 11/27 04:01
8F:推 treesheep:旅行的意義應該the meaning of traveling吧? 11/27 13:55
9F:推 KITTYHI:樓上的﹐可是老師的專輯上面確實是這樣寫的﹐不解 11/30 12:18
10F:→ DivineIre:綺貞的歌 中文歌名與英文並不一定有關係唷^^ 03/10 22:40