作者friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)
看板Cheer
标题[疑问] 想请大家帮个忙
时间Mon Nov 27 00:06:40 2006
因为我有一堂课英文听讲,老师要大家上台介绍一个事物三分钟
於是我想介绍老师给大家认识
刚刚写好了介绍稿,只是英文不好的我一定有很多错误
希望大家能帮我指正一下
My Favorite Singer Cheer
Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陈绮
贞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she
write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other
singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and
they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she
performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is
like a picture”.
Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse
inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also
like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some
articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just
like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to
do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much.
Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the
Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her
voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening
in midnight
I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too.
And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you.
我真的英文很差><...
请大家多多指正 (可以偷偷的笑我没关系 > <".... 我很努力写了)
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1F:推 mandyshaq:creationary→creative 11/27 00:21
2F:推 sav321: 音乐放出来就对了!有什麽好介绍的!XD 11/27 00:22
3F:推 SunDoll:我之前也曾被老师叫上去讲~但因为是临时的,讲不太出个所以 11/27 00:22
4F:→ SunDoll:然..好像有一些些小文法错误吧^^"但我指正的不太好~"~ 11/27 00:23
5F:推 stone1980:还好你最後有播歌~ 不管讲怎样 都有仙女下凡来解救 ^^y 11/27 00:36
6F:推 friendalvin:不管缺点再怎麽多…老师的歌都可以挽救我的缺失^^" 11/27 00:45
7F:推 smartfen:同二楼!!放出来之後说:Just listen to the music. 11/27 04:01
8F:推 treesheep:旅行的意义应该the meaning of traveling吧? 11/27 13:55
9F:推 KITTYHI:楼上的﹐可是老师的专辑上面确实是这样写的﹐不解 11/30 12:18
10F:→ DivineIre:绮贞的歌 中文歌名与英文并不一定有关系唷^^ 03/10 22:40