作者amorch (on the wagon)
看板translator
标题Re: 但丁为Beatrice写下的文字
时间Fri Sep 25 16:40:30 2009
※ 引述《deadly (迈向与影子的决斗)》之铭言:
但丁 La Vita Nuova (The New Life) 有文有诗,deadly兄贴的部分是文。
Dante Gabriel Rossetti英译比较艰深,我参考另两个英译本,试译一下
,勉强达意而已。
La Vita Nuova 原文
http://tinyurl.com/yagblu7
Dante Gabriel Rossetti英译
http://tinyurl.com/y86ggc5
A. S. Kline英译
http://tinyurl.com/ye4g86f
Charles Eliot Norton英译
http://tinyurl.com/ybdvvkl
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D. G. Rossetti英译
And betaking me to the loneliness of mine own room, I fell to thinking
of this most courteous lady, thinking of whom I was overtaken by a
pleasant slumber, wherein a marvellous vision was presented to me:
A. S. Kline英译
and I returned to the solitude of my own room, and fell to thinking of
this most gracious one. And thinking of her a sweet sleep overcame me,
in which a marvellous vision appeared to me:
C. E. Norton英译
and, betaking myself to the solitude of my own chamber, I sat myself
down to think of this most courteous lady. And thinking of her, a sweet
slumber overcame me, in which a marvellous vision appeared to me;
中文试译
回到空荡荡房间,我开始想这温文女人。想着想着,便舒服睡着,梦中异象呈现:
D. G. Rossetti英译
for there appeared to be in my room a mist of the colour of fire,
within the which I discerned the figure of a lord of terrible aspect
to such as should gaze upon him, but who seemed therewithal to rejoice
inwardly that it was a marvel to see.
A. S. Kline英译
so that it seemed I saw in my room a flame-coloured nebula, in the midst
of which I discerned the shape of a lord of fearful aspect to those who
gazed on him: and he appeared to me with such joy, so much joy within
himself, that it was a miraculous thing:
C. E. Norton英译
for methought I saw in my chamber a cloud of the color of fire, within
which I discerned a shape of a Lord of aspect fearful to whoso might
look upon him; and he seemed to me so joyful within himself that a
marvellous thing it was;
中文试译
房间里红雾缭绕,雾中可见一人,外形狰狞,人见人怕。但他内心喜悦,看来
甚是奇异。
D. G. Rossetti英译
Speaking he said many things, among the which I could understand but
few; and of these, this: Ego dominus tuus.
A. S. Kline英译
and in his speech he said many things, of which I understood only a
few: among them I understood this: 'Ego dominus tuus: I am your lord.'
C. E. Norton英译
and in his words he said many things which I understood not, save a
few, among which I understood these: Ego Dominus tuus [I am thy Lord].
中文试译
他开口说了许多事。我听懂的不多,其中有:我是你的主。
D. G. Rossetti英译
In his arms it seemed to me that a person was sleeping, covered only
with a blood-coloured cloth; upon whom looking very attentively, I knew
that it was the lady of the salutation who had deigned the day before
to salute me.
A. S. Kline英译
It seemed to me he held a figure sleeping in his arms, naked except
that it seemed to me to be covered lightly with a crimson cloth:
gazing at it very intently I realised it was the lady of the greeting,
she who had deigned to greet me before that day.
C. E. Norton英译
In his arms meseemed to see a person sleeping, naked, save that she
seemed to me to be wrapped lightly in a crimson cloth; whom I,
regarding very intently, recognized as the lady of the salutation,
who had the day before deigned to salute me.
中文试译
他抱着一个沈睡的人,此人只盖着一条血色的布。仔细一瞧,原来是前一天
向我打招呼的女人。
D. G. Rossetti英译
And he who held her held also in his hand a thing that was burning
in flames; and he said to me, Vide cor tuum.
A. S. Kline英译
And in one of his hands it seemed to me that he held something
completely on fire, and he seemed to say to me these words:
'Vide cor tuum: Look upon your heart.
C. E. Norton英译
And in one of his hands it seemed to me that he held a thing which
was all on fire; and it seemed to me that he said to me these words:
Vide cor tuum [Behold thy heart].
中文试译
他手中尚有一物,着火燃烧。他向我说:看,你的心。
D. G. Rossetti英译
But when he had remained with me a little while, I thought that he
set himself to awaken her that slept; after the which he made her to
eat that thing which flamed in his hands; and she ate as one fearing.
A. S. Kline英译
And when he had stood for a while, he seemed to wake her who slept:
and by his art was so forceful that he made her eat the thing that
burned in her hand, which she ate hesitantly.
C. E. Norton英译
And when he had remained awhile, it seemed to me that he awoke her
that slept; and he so far prevailed upon her with his craft as to
make her eat that thing which was burning in his hand; and she ate it timidly.
中文试译
片刻之後,他唤醒沈睡的女人,逼她吃这燃烧之物。她害怕地吃了。
: 贴上来,也许有前辈强者有兴趣顺手一翻。
: 小弟有空也来翻翻看……@@
: 但丁,名人噎…
: 今天才发现丹堤咖啡就是以但丁为名………
: 象徵着义大利的咖啡……
: 补充一下,但丁九岁时遇到八岁的Beatrice一见倾心。
: 结果没有任何结果,但是这纯纯的爱是他创作的泉源。
: 还为她写下很多诗句,以下贴自wiki..
: And betaking me to the loneliness of mine own room,
: I fell to thinking of this most courteous lady,
: thinking of whom I was overtaken by a pleasant slumber,
: wherein a marvelous vision was presented to me:
: for there appeared to be in my room a mist of the colour of fire,
: within the which I discerned the figure of a Lord of terrible aspect
: to such as should gaze upon him,
: but who seemed there-withal to rejoice inwardly
: that it was a marvel to see.
: Speaking he said many things,
: among the which I could understand but few;
: and of these, this:
: "I am thy Lord".
: In his arms it seemed to me that a person was sleeping,
: covered only with a crimson cloth;
: upon whom looking very attentively,
: I knew that it was the Lady of the Salutation,
: who had deigned the day before to salute me.
: And he who held her held also in his hand a thing that was burning in flames,
: and he said to me "Behold thy heart".
: But when he had remained with me a little while,
: I thought that he set himself to awaken her that slept;
: after the which he made her to eat that thing which flamed in his hand; and she ate as one fearing.
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1F:推 lifegetter:总之,作梦的结果可以PO到八卦版去(前言真的有像到) 09/25 18:14
2F:→ lifegetter:solitude of my own chamber 回房独处 09/25 18:16
3F:→ amorch:楼上简洁。 我译"空荡荡"也不太对 09/25 19:02
4F:推 deadly:版上神人真多...@@ 09/26 01:43
5F:→ amorch:神人没有,神狗倒是有一只,名叫孤狗 XD 10/12 23:44