大家好．．． 因为心中有困顿，希望前辈们能好心指点我一下．．． 我目前在一般公司有正职工作　 但是我想朝着有一日成为全职中／英互译的译者方向努力 於是我打算从翻译社兼职开始试试 上周五下午，我找了两家翻译社网站，写信过去，没过多久，翻译社回信， 我把试译稿翻完後，就将试译稿寄去， 但今天却没有收到任何回音，我想，有可能是我翻译水准、能力不够，於是有了一个 念头．．． 希望能把我的试译稿内容post上来，希望能得到前辈给我点意见，指点我，假设翻译社 不会接受我的试译稿的话，问题和原因会是出在哪里（用语、措辞、文风等等？） 我很希望我能至少知道自己能去改善和努力的方向为何．．． 那篇翻译稿是翻译社统一公开的试译稿，我想应该许多人都早已知道过，所以post 在这里，我想应该不会出状况或违版规吧？？ @@? 因为试译稿总共有三段，两段中文翻英，一段英翻中，很抱歉喔！因为内容有些长， 但如果前辈能针对其中一段给我指点，我就感激不尽了！ 原文和译文贴在下方，如果有违规之处，烦请版主包涵，并劳请立即删除吧。谢谢！ 一、(中译英) 政府播迁来台後，六十万国军部队进驻台湾各个军事要地，在仓皇急促转进下，来台军人 随驻地安置在营房内，眷属的安置则显得窘迫，随部队移动的军眷，大多暂住学校、寺庙 、农舍等，并有自行围地搭建简陋空间等临时容身之所，当时因随时要反攻大陆，并无久 居打算。嗣後因管理上的需要，逐渐发展出「眷村」。一张一张泛黄的照片，都叙说着一 页页患难与共、相濡以沫的艰辛岁月，它确实忠诚地记录了事情的真象，将五十多年来的 眷村作直接的陈述，从早年军旅生活的播迁，竹篱泥墙的简陋眷区，情逾金兰的眷村妈妈 ，眷村新一代的成长，辛劳多样的家庭副业以及趣味滋生的休闲生活等，深切体会这段刻 苦铭心的共同记忆眷村岁月。 After the government moved to Taiwan, six billion nationalist troops entered and were stationed in each individual military vital area. Subject to the flurried hurried retreat, soliders who came to Taiwan were settled in station barracks with their family dependents arranged in straitened circumstances. Moving along with troops, the family dependents mainly lodged at schools, temples, farmhouses, etc. for the time being, and some fenced off ground by themselves to put up crude spaces more or less as provisional places to stay. Without any intention to perminently reside, they were to counter attack the mainland at a moment. Later on for the managing needs, the “Dependents’ Villages” were gradually forming. As page by page shown, every yellowing picture following one after another to depict and tell the difficult passed years when they stood together in times of need and helped each other even though with meagre resources, has faithfully recorded what the truth is and made an upfront statement for the dependents’ villages for more than fifty years, starting from army migration lives in the early years, simple and crude dependents' enclaves with bamboo fences and mud-consolidated walls, dependents’ villages mothers whose friendship better than sworn sisterhood, the growth of their new generations in villages, domestic sidelines in hardship and diversity, and interest-bred casual lives and so on. This painstaking and unforgetable common memory in the years and months spent in the dependents’ villages was experienced in profound realization. 二、（中译英；老实说，这篇第一点的聘雇书和第二点的聘书，我搞不清楚， 是同一份吗 @@？） 到职 1. 新进人员由相关部门主管甄选，经总经理确认後签发聘雇书。 2. 获得聘用之新进人员由人力资源部寄发专函通知，需在一星期内至公司指定的医 院诊所接受健康检查，并在健康检查报告通过审核後发给聘书通知录用。 3. 到职前，新进人员应详细阅读并填妥由人力资源部寄发之人事资料， 并於报到当日将所有相关的资料文件缴交至人力资源部，以完成报到手续。 除另有约定外，员工自到职日起三个月内为试用期。试用期间，若员工与公司双方中有 任何一方认为不适合时，得於七天前正式以书面向对方提出解除雇用关系。公司得以支付 薪资以代通知。 Taking Office 1. New recruits shall be selected by superviser(s) from relevant departments. Upon confirmation of the general manager, an Employment Agreement will be signed and issued. 2. Upon receipt of an admission notice sent by the Human Resources Department, the new recruit(s) who has/ have got the job offer shall attend a health examination within one week at the hospitals or clinics desginated by the employer. Those who pass the evaluation on the health examination report will receive the Employment Agreement as notice. 3. Before taking office, the new employee(s) shall read in detail and complete the personnel data sent by the Human Resources Department and shall return all the relevant documents to the Human Resources Department on the date of taking office in order to complete the registration procedure. Unless otherwise specified, the employee probationary period shall be three months starting from the take office date. During the period, shall either of the two parties, the employee and the employer, finds the employment unsatisfactory, a written advice shall be duly presented to the other party in seven days to terminate the employment relations. Paying wages in lieu of a notice by the employer is allowed. 三、（英译中） Activity and Selectivity Research into audience selectivity was originally stimulated by hopes or fears about the effects of mass communication. Propagandists and advertisers viewed the large and unselective audience as a suitably receptive target for their persuasive efforts. Critics of mass culture feared that a large and passive audience would be exploited and culturally harmed. The media, especially television, were thought to result in increased passivity. There was much concern for children, since passive addiction to one medium after another (comics, films, radio, television) was seen as the enemy of education, discrimination, active recreation, and normal personal and social development. It was the would-be media propagandists who were most disappointed by the findings of research, since it soon appeared that selection and avoidance by their target audiences meant that even large-scale media campaigns were most likely to reach the already converted and less likely to reach those they wanted to influence. The truly passive mass audience proved something of a myth, although television did go some way toward delivering a large audience with relatively low involvement and thus fewer defenses against persuasion.　 The solace offered to culture critics and educationist by evidence of limited effects was mixed. Theory fastened on the image of the “obstinate audience” --- one that might not always be very selective in attention, but was selective in perception and resistant to unwanted influence. At least the audience was not the passive victim portrayed in mass society theory, although controversy remains about how active the typical media audience really is and about what activity means. There is quite a lot of evidence to show that television viewing, at least, is not a very salient activity, nor an object of strong feelings. On the other hand, reading and film-going are likely to be more personally involving. 活动与选择性 人们对大众传播造成的影响有所期盼或担忧，是促进观众选择性研究的始因。 宣传单位及广告机构，为了不辜负其充满说服力的努力成果，将广大、未经挑选的观众视 为一只适合接收讯息的标靶，而大众文化评论家担忧这样一群广大被动的观众会被剥削， 在文化角度上会被伤害。人们将传播媒体，尤其是电视，看做为消极性增加的原因，更令 人忧心的对象是孩童，因为人们将孩童对媒体（漫画、电影、收音机、电视）一个接一个 地消极上瘾行为，视为是教育、判别能力、休闲娱乐、正常个体及社会发展层面上的敌人 。 会因为这些研究发现而感到最失望者，就是那些想要成为传播媒体的宣传单位，因为很快 他们就会看出其目标观众挑选及回避的行为代表一件事，就是即使是大规模传媒政营最有 可能触及到的，会是那些已经被影响的观众，而他们最不可能触及到的，却又是那些他们 想要去影响的。虽然电视确实是朝着用较低参与度而对说服行为有较少防御性的方向来影 响广大观众，真正被动的他们却反而证实了某项迷思。 迹象显示，传媒的影响是有限度的，但文化评论家与教育家因此得到的安慰却是喜忧参半 。理论紧系在「顽强的观众」此一形象上－他们可能不总是留意地挑选，但对意识到不想 要的影响并加以抗拒可是会变得很会选择的。虽然关於典型的传媒观众是如何真正地主动 ，还有活动之意义为何的争议仍存在，至少观众并不像是一般社会理论中所描绘的被动受 害者。不少证据显示，至少观看电视并非是很活跃的活动，亦非人们强烈情感的倾注对象 ，倒是阅读及看电影可能会有比较高的个体参与度。 ---- 恳请前辈指点．．．感激．．． --

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