作者misaki1124 (ike!)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Out
时间Thu Apr 10 22:42:01 2008
''That's it!''
I kicked away the quilt
and tossed the bed sheet
down on the floor.
I stood up straight
shouted
''to hell with pajamas!''
real LOUD
so that myself could hear it.
-Well, the message was hard to comprehend.
But it's all right, it's all right.
You see,
I am putting on my jeans and T-shirt.
Apparently, ready for some time out.
There I am, out,
seeing the sun so bright,
feeling the day so pleasant.
-Well, one can't ask for more.
And it's all right, it's all right.
You see,
I'm strolling on the street.
Apparently, enjoying some time out.
Black, silver, golden and white,
all these 406 of Peugeot.
How now, how now,
all those sugared words,
all those hot gazes,
all those sweet embraces,
all those loving caresses.
Out is danger.
Out is bad.
Darn!
Why am I not in my slumbers?
--
我做了一个不愿意醒来的梦
是一场很美的梦
我一定是醉了
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